Monday, October 29, 2007

Rough Draft A

Its hard to realize your only escape
was also nearly your demise.
Shotgun's not so luxerious
as we tango with the headlights.
Hold my hand,
avoid the metal entombing our innocence.
I recalled a summer day
when a stranger's hands pulled air from my lungs,
and the warm sun was murky from beneath the water.
I know what it means to save a life.
I know what it means for it to be my own.
I was laid amongst the splinters
of chaos and fiber glass.
And as I watched gasoline seep from his eyes
an arch of red crested over the hill.
therein the gleaming lights
lies my salvation.

2 comments:

ldanks said...

this poem is amaizing, you used imagery well, so descriptive, i love the word choice =]

Anonymous said...

Good post.